.....Yes or No

ParanoidThoughts8 · December 2007

<img src="http://i11.tinypic.com/8ekaey1.png"; alt="http://i11.tinypic.com/8ekaey1.png"; class="bb-image" /> Okay i wanted to do a kinda crazy dog. and i was playing poker the other day. and i thought of it. and i finally drew it. is it okay? i know something is off but im not sure what

WeisseEdelweiss · December 2007

If anything the snout is very long and you should crop shorten it. Other than that, good one on you.

TashaWasha · December 2007

I'm just going to pop in and say the tail on the butt seems kinda high. See the dog's butt <a href="http://www.dargate.com/231_auction/231_images/2700.jpg"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">Here</a>, you could also try <a href="http://www.doggydayschool.com/images/Brandylistens_small.jpg"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">Here</a> and a picture of a butt & tail <a href="http://i15.tinypic.com/8f348ls.jpg"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">Here</a>. Hope that makes sense. XD

Mossflower · December 2007

I think it's really cute ^.^ You could probably make his head a bit smaller, but apart from that it's very good :P

KiteKatsumi9 · December 2007

I still like the way you shade/highlight XD The head is too big for the body (if you're going for a realisticish look). That's the main thing that I see. Something about the body doesn't look right, but I honestly can't put my finger on it. The size of the head is the "problem" that sticks out to me. Another thing that I see is the dog doesn't have a shoulder. (it doesn't show on some breeds, but I like to add it in) <a href="http://accad.osu.edu/~hcaprett/images/ac790_mo_cap/dog-skeleton3.jpg"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://accad.osu.edu/~hcaprett/images/a ... leton3.jpg</a> That'll help you with anatomy ^^

ParanoidThoughts8 · December 2007

yeah. i figured out it was the head that made it look odd. but i cant fix it since its in paint. ill draw a new one soon. normally id try to use a ref for proportions. but since it wasnt a commission i didnt. im getting much better at drawing with no ref. and im starting to realise it. but i need to start practicing heads and tails. thats for pointing those things out. ill research anatomy tutorials

Howdy, Stranger!

.....Yes or No

Comments