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Kristio0o · February 2008

Well personally i think homwork should have a section but it doesnt matter

I am a Jr. in High School and i am offering tutoring here on VP Basically if you have problems with english history math etc. i aswell as other SMART VPians can help you get the answers!! :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: :idea: so Lets Help you with your homework good ideas are typed Essays, if you wnat proof reading or just opinions

EoS Gyrfalcon · February 2008

Lol, if you would read my "short story" for a school project, I would post it. =P

Kristio0o · February 2008

absolutly

EoS Gyrfalcon · February 2008

Alrighty. In this short story, I was supposed to depict the consternation of a killer. Basically, the main character is being overwhelmed with her sins. XD Based on one of the books we've read. *Sidenote: The main character is a tad on the crazy side. Curdle of Blood Silent as the grave, hiding in a turmoil of lethargic gazes, heart beating frantically... A girl hiding from her transgressions. Reality was taken into deception. She held her blood-stained dagger with tears streaming down her face, terrified, but ready to deliver another lethal and frenetic strike. Seemingly surrounded by sadistic smiles, she flung helplessly into the air at nothing. Her own imagination had taken away every ounce of sense that linked her with humanity and the real world. At this point, she was in an enigmatic prison, bound by ties of disarray and delusion. It seemed like hours when only mere minutes had passed. She was still being tormented by the eradication of her thoughts. Her breathing was shallow, and her life was profusely being drained by the utter haunting and senseless effectuation of the punishment. It was an adumbration of the end that was nearing. There was no route to escape in this concentrated state of mind. The lives she had taken were indeed vindictive. Isolation and demise kept her from sanity. Sacrilege, defilement, desolation , and regret guided her hands to grasp the dirk of the blade. She lay there with dagger in hand, drenched in her own repulsive blood when she delved in into her flesh, silent as a grave, motionless to the curdle of blood. Suggestions are lurved. ;] Thanks for reading.

Kristio0o · February 2008

honestly, amazing!!! that is really discriptive,interesting, and graphic, you should get an a

EoS Gyrfalcon · February 2008

I would hope my teacher has the same perspective as you. XD Thanks~

~Topleaf~ · February 2008

Very nice story :P You are a good writer.

NickelbackLuver · February 2008

Yeah, it was good ^.^

dachshund girl · February 2008

Good Idea. I think vp should have a section for homework and you any one can help out and get help

Paradise_Puppy! · February 2008

dogqueen im a Jr. in highschool as well. How cool. And yeah I agree that would be pretty nice but then again some people may try and cheat.

Kristio0o · February 2008

true but still if you honestly need help you need help lol

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