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ZOMG! O.O I wrote an essay having to do with VP!!! =O

I wrote an essay having to do with a dog I trained on VP for mi English 10 class! :O<br>It's amazing, isn't it!?! xD<br><br>Well, here it is. I'll link to the actual dog at the bottom. xD<br><br><br><span style="font-size:75">Amanda<br>Mrs. Stewart<br>English 10-Period 7<br>17 September 2009<br>….<br> In the time-frame of just a half-hour, I was rather proud of myself. It was about 22.00 hours on a Saturday night. Nice and relaxed, I decided to train one of my new Kai Ken imports. More importantly, she was to be one of the first generation in the Kai Ken line I was about to start. Her stats were terrible, as most imports’ stats are, so I planned on rough housing with her until the age of 11 years and six months. Thus, I would also have her aggression capped to higher her offspring’s aggression stat. The first thing that I did was maxed her disciplines skill, which maxes at 100; there is also the other three skills (show, sport and working), but I left those out because they don’t matter in breeding. I began maxing her disciplines by using groom and used rough house to keep her mood up. I finished that in a mere four minutes, about average for me. She came out to be about one year and 8 months, meaning I had to either rough house or groom her for about 10 additional years, 9 years and 8 months to be exact. I decided to rough house with her to cap aggression. This took me about 14 minutes, with her age being at only 8 years, 5 months and 2 weeks old. I was surprised that short amount of time to get her this far along, rough housing and grooming for this long usually takes me a good two hours! So noting her current age I still had about three years and one month to go. I ran upstairs to grab a cup of ice water and came back down to set out for the last stretch. I finally maxed the rest of her stats: friendly, adaptability, loyalty, courage, hyper, strength, intelligence, endurance and speed; in addition to this, I completed her training with all stats maxed, at either 200 or higher.</span><br><br>It looks small on there, but I think it turned out to be pretty good, I still have to think up a good title.. o.o any help on that? o.O<br>and here's the link: <a href="http://www.virtualpups.com/index.php?r=dog/view&id=1540561"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://www.virtualpups.com/index.php?r=dog/view&id=1540561</a>;
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  • <span style="font-size:75"><span style="color:#ff00d2">What was the essay topic? xDDD<br><br>That's pretty cool. lmao You made it seem so intense. xDD<br><br>My teacher would be like whaaat. o.0 But it's all good, -no one- in RL knows about my playing VP. xD</span></span>
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  • <span style="font-size:92">Ehm.. interesting?<br><br>What was your prompt? O.o</span>
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  • Wow never seen anything like that. My teacher wouldn't know what the hell I was saying. Rofl. I think only one of my friends know I play vp and only because she showed it to me (I dont think she knows I still play). I wish we got to writing in my English class but so far nothing. I didn't even really have writing in my college 10 class last year. <br><br>Maybe you should include more information on the game? If I didn't already play, I'd be lost..
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  • <span style="font-size:75"><span style="color:#ff00d2">What was the essay topic? xDDD<br><br>That's pretty cool. lmao You made it seem so intense. xDD<br><br>My teacher would be like whaaat. o.0 But it's all good, -no one- in RL knows about my playing VP. xD</span></span>
    <br><br>Well, we just had to write a one page paragraph about an exciting story that happened to us. xD<br>And I deem VP pretty damn exciting. lmao<br>No one really knows about mi playing VP either. o.O I guess everybody'll know now. D:<br><br><br>
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    Ehm.. interesting? <br><br>What was your prompt? O.o
    <br><br>well, this just happened last weekend and we got the assignment on monday..so I decided to write about how proud I was of miself being able to rough house until 11.6 in about a half hour. ^-^ which is a record for me. xD<br><br>
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    Wow never seen anything like that. My teacher wouldn't know what the hell I was saying. Rofl. I think only one of my friends know I play vp and only because she showed it to me (I dont think she knows I still play). I wish we got to writing in my English class but so far nothing. I didn't even really have writing in my college 10 class last year. <br><br>Maybe you should include more information on the game? If I didn't already play, I'd be lost..
    <br><br>mi mum was reading it an was all confused. xD<br>I thought about adding more information about VP..but then I thought about how I'd end up going on and on for about 20 pages and trying to recruit more people to play. xD<br>So I decided not to, and it's only 3 words off from going onto another page. >.< and it can only be one tops.
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  • and with a little bit of editing and such:<br><br><span style="font-size:75">Amanda<br>Mrs. Stewart<br>English 10-Period 7<br>17 September 2009<br>....<br>In the time-frame of just a half-hour, I was rather proud of myself. It was about 22.00 hours on a Saturday night. Nice and relaxed, I decided to train one of my new Kai Ken imports. More importantly, she was to be one of the first generation in the Kai Ken line I was about to start. Her stats were terrible, as most imports’ stats are, so I planned on rough housing with her until the age of 11 years and six months. Thus, I would also have her aggression capped to 250 in order to heighten her offspring’s aggression stat. The first action I executed was maxed her disciplines skill, which maxes at 100; there is also the other three skills (show, sport and working), but I left those out because they don’t matter in breeding. I began maxing her disciplines by using groom and rough house to keep her mood up. I finished that in a mere four minutes, about average for me. She came out to be about one year and 8 months, meaning I had to either rough house or groom her for about 10 additional years, 9 years and 8 months to be exact. I decided to rough house with her to cap aggression. This took me about 14 minutes, with her age being at only 8 years, 5 months and 2 weeks old. I was surprised at the short amount of time it took to get her this far along Rough housing with grooming for this long usually takes me a good two hours! Noting her current age, I still had about three years and one month to go. I ran upstairs to grab a cup of ice water and came back down and set out for the last stretch. I finally maxed the rest of her stats; in addition to this, I completed her training with all stats maxed, at either 200 or higher.</span>
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