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--->I woke up, gasping for breath. I had been frequented by night terrors every day after Mrtav showed up. They were always about ridiculous myths and stories; I paid them no more attention than any other annoyance.
--->I forced myself up a…
Okies. I'm adding more on about the snake and a little history onto her part, but-not enough as to have her history completly unfold at the first part of the story (hopefully will be book worthy this time. xD )
I'll post it in about 10-15 minutes wh…
Well, you jump around with the perspectives alot if you ask me. I can't seem to remember which ones are called which, but "come" insinuates that it's the main character speaking or such, when the first person was in a view that insinuates it being a…
I don't really think there's a -need-, persay, for it.
Most things that people want critiqued on is an artistic form, therefore-it should go in Artist Alley. -shrugs-
But I guess there would be no harm in it.
Meeko wrote:
femalevamp14 wrote:
Dogs Released:
8.26--19[/b]
What breeds were they and how many of each?
just mi aussies I've got down.
I'll note if it's another breed.