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1 mil on all without starting bids
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33 mil
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Thanks! ^^
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27
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25 mil
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I'll go 10 trainings each. ^^ Hey, I didn't know this was your forum name!
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Updated and PMed you. ^^
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I'll PM you. ^^ As for the trainings, it's tentative as I'm mostly looking for VPC.
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Mysterous Love 1. What do you like most about the writing? I like that it is a personal account; your emotions are clear in the story due to the first person point of view. 2. What can be improved? I know that it's first person and meant to be m…
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Bump ^^ :arrow:
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Updated. Thanks!
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Updated Thanks!
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Congrats!
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Updated and added an extra slot
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I figured I might as well enter. It's a tad short. xP I remember like it was yesterday: Nearly all the leaves had blown away; Only one remained on that withered tree Teetering, giving little hope to me I knew I would die the moment it fell Scar…
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SB
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1 mil on the second male and female
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SB both
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2.3 mil
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2mil and 50k, just for the hilariousness of it ^^
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2.5 mil on the last one
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2 mil on both
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1.5 milly
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3 mil on 2
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Young_Native: I'd kind of gotten that impression but wasn't entirely sure so I figured it would be best to point it out instead of just assuming. Since that was your goal, you accomplished it very subtly, which is a strength, though you'll have to b…
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2 milly both
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Sb both
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-poke- May we go ahead and post critique? I'll be entering later, but figured I might as well do some critiquing to get in the writing mood! xD MidnightCivetta's 1. What do you like most about the writing? Personally, I like the first paragraph …